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		<title>Comment on Graphic Novels and Model Writing by timclifford</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 18 May 2009 22:16:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you. I don&#039;t do the drawings. I only write the scripts. They took over a month, not counting all the time I thought about them before ever writing a word.

I try to write in the presence of my students, but I rarely do it without having a pretty good idea of what I&#039;m going to say. When I make mistakes, it not a bad thing; students love to catch their teachers making errors and it helps them see that mistakes are a part of writing.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you. I don&#8217;t do the drawings. I only write the scripts. They took over a month, not counting all the time I thought about them before ever writing a word.</p>
<p>I try to write in the presence of my students, but I rarely do it without having a pretty good idea of what I&#8217;m going to say. When I make mistakes, it not a bad thing; students love to catch their teachers making errors and it helps them see that mistakes are a part of writing.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Graphic Novels and Model Writing by elibeth scbwimember</title>
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		<dc:creator>elibeth scbwimember</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 18 May 2009 18:17:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Congratulations on your graphic novels. That&#039;s great! 
Did you do all the drawings for the novels as well as the writing?
How long did it take to complete one? And you did three?
I wish I understood how you model the writing for your students. I&#039;d like to know how you do that.  Do you write something and then present it, or do you actually write in the presence of your students? Tell us more.  A great blog.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Congratulations on your graphic novels. That&#8217;s great!<br />
Did you do all the drawings for the novels as well as the writing?<br />
How long did it take to complete one? And you did three?<br />
I wish I understood how you model the writing for your students. I&#8217;d like to know how you do that.  Do you write something and then present it, or do you actually write in the presence of your students? Tell us more.  A great blog.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Great Moments by timclifford</title>
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		<dc:creator>timclifford</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 27 Mar 2009 16:20:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey--that is great news, Emily! I appreciate you letting me know.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey&#8211;that is great news, Emily! I appreciate you letting me know.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Great Moments by Emily Raij</title>
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		<dc:creator>Emily Raij</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Mar 2009 14:08:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Nice blog, Tim! Thought I&#039;d add some good news to your post--we sold your book at the ASCD conference over the weekend and got some nice feedback on it from a teacher looking to move from a writing-workshop format to integrating writing across the content areas more.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nice blog, Tim! Thought I&#8217;d add some good news to your post&#8211;we sold your book at the ASCD conference over the weekend and got some nice feedback on it from a teacher looking to move from a writing-workshop format to integrating writing across the content areas more.</p>
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